My Biopoem June 8, 2011
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This is my biopoem. It means a lot to me. I spent a long time pouring my heart our in this artistic poem so that you can get to know me a little better. What do you think?
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I like this poem
THe first thing that struck me about your poem was the vibrant colors. I think you spent a long time on this and it shows how much effort you put in. Your fonts are great because they are varied. One thing you can do before take your snip is to right click on your words and click ignore so you don’t have those squiggly lines.
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I love the colors you used, they really caught my attention. I noticed how you mut have taken your time to complete this and make it look as wonderful as it does. One thing i believe you should do is take out that one line that is all black nd maybe add some color too it. (:
i like the way instead of putting where you live, you put that you a residenrt of earth. And how that all the deeper inner thoughts where all put in black to show how seriouse they are to you
i really like your comment it was expressed very nicely
This is a very emotional poem to me. The different fonts blend in with the description of what you’re saying, such as when you said earth the font blended and was beautiful. i Have no negative comments on this and you did a very good job
I THINK THAT IT IS VERY COLORFULL. HOW DID YOU THINK OF THAT? I LIKE THE FONTS. YOU NEED TO WORK ON MAKING THE COLOR MACHING THE MOOD OF THE POEM. IF YOU NEED HELP, JUST LKET ME KNOW. I AM HERE TO HELP.
I like the different types of font . They are creative. You should use more colors , to make it more colorful.
I think your biopoem looks great with all of the colors you used nice job!
The first thing that I like was that the words pop out towards me. Making me feel that I wished to read more. In addition, I like the colors it shows me your background and what kind of person you are. However, I feel you could have used more colors to make me get more in the mood of this poem. Over all I thought it was great.
i like how you made it colorful and how you decorated it i think you did a really good job with your bio-poem i think you need to work on taking off thosed lines and it would be perfect.
Good job!
The first thing that I like was that the words pop out towards me. Making me feel that I wished to read more. In addition, I like the colors it shows me your background and what kind of person you are. However, I feel you could have used more colors to make me get more in the mood of this poem. Over all I thought it was awesome.
I feel that was very horrible for you to copy my word and believe that it is yours. You need to come up with your own work.
Very nice editing. but you should work revising your work so that your poem would be appropiate to look at. i love how you kept it simple to the writing and understandable in spelling.
I feel that was very horrible for you to copy my word and believe that it is yours. You need to come up with your own stuff.
You plagiarizer -.-
i think that this poem is very colorful and very well constructed good job.
i like how you used colors and sizes. But u need to put lines 5 and 6 together
I think you did an ok job, just need to work a little more harder, but other that that you were ok.
I like the font sizes and colors you used on your biopoem. I think you could’ve put a little more effort into the color scheme. Although, overall i think you did a great job!
You did a good job with your font and sizes i think you should have tried to make the 6th and 7 line together on one line.
I really like your poem . I like how you used different fonts , font colors , and sizes. It shows me more about what you like , by using the different fonts , colors , and sizes it defiantly showed me the mood of your biopeom , Good work [:
i like it specially the letters
I really like the way you changed the fonts of the words and the colors. I think you did an amazing job!
I like how you used different font sizes in your poem. Although, i do believe you could have put more effort into the colors and fonts. Although, i believe you couldve put more effort into the colors and the type of fonts you used. Overall, good job!!
nice job i loved how u changed the colors and the fonts to match the meanings of the words. thumbs up!!
i love the words you used i thought they were really unique & i just thought that you showed have made your name a dark color so i could see it better, but other then that your poem is good.
I really like all the unique fonts and sizes that you used to make your poem creative. I also really liked how you used fonts and colors that can make people imagine what your saying, like when you used a specific font for spiders. You did a really nice job!
Wow this poem is beautiful. I love how you express yourself with your words, the colors are amazing.I would also like to go to Japan i think there cultures are interesting. This poem shows me that you are a very artistic and unique person. Awsome job
Your poem is very artistic and intresting
really nice job. i really like thae color and size of the font. i also hope you make your goals. espilly when you move to japan
I like your biopoem.I like it becausae you changed the colors and fonts. I like that most of the words are in diffrent fonts. i think for next time make all the words difrent colors and fonts.
This is an amazing poem. But maybe you should be a little more positive. I like how you made it creative and used different fonts. I can relate to you because i am afraid of spiders too. This poem is very interesting. Great job.
This is a good biopoem. It has all of the correct details in the correct lines, but it would be nice if you added more color into your poem. Although, I do like the fact that you put the word “Earth” in blue and green — nice way to add something.
I like your poem. I noticed how you used many different fonts to express your fellings like for worried. Also how you made different Size fonts. Also how you made earth blue and green for the colors of the earth. This was a great poem and you did a great job!
i like your biopoem it is very colorful . I like the fonts you use for your name and everything . i also like the colors you have chosen.
this poem is very interesting. Its nice that this expresses how you feel inside.
I like your biopoem because it is artistic and defines who you are.
This post is good. I like the way you added the different colors and fonts. Plus, the way you made the colors match the word “earth”. You have good potential. Good Job! Keep the good work up.
I like your bio-poem because it is very created. i like how you uses different colors and font.another example is i like the words you put into it….it reminds me of myself
Nice job using different colors, fonts, and font sizes. I think you’re very creative and I like the way you change the fonts to match the words.
lucy your biopoem is vey creative. I like the way you change the fonts and colors. Its very nice, but next time you should put a picture on. Good job lucy keep on doing what your doing.
Oh my God your poem is so good.You put alot of different fonts and different colors to expressyour words.You really showed your feelings that you are sad. I love the way you made the word Earth green and blue.
I like how you use a lot of colors.Also I like how you like to express your feelings and how you used different font.
Good job using different fonts, and colors. I like the way you changed the font sizes to match the words. I think that was very creative.
hi i like you poem your so creative. I like the way how you put all the different colors. i think that you should be more confident
I like how your font sizes and colors and your creativity on this biopoem. By the way this is an excellent poem written
i like your Bio-poem. Its really pretty and colorful<3. i love sweets too and i hate spiders. i like the different fonts you used. i hope u had a nice time wriing this.
The constructive comments that i think i can gave Lucy is to change the font of the letter C. Good job using different colors in your biopoem. Before handing in make sure you do spell check. Also nice way of using different font. i like the way you wrote the word earth.
I like this poem. it should be more positive. It seems depressed. If it was more postive it would be great. that is the only promblem.
I think you did an ok job, just need to work a little more harder, but other that that you were ok.
I like the way u made it different colors and u also should of worked it a little
I like this poem it is very unique and creative. I like how you used the different fonts, colors, and sizes. Very Good Job!!
This is really pretty, I like the way you wrote your name. I also like the fronts you used it brings your poem together and shows your personalty.
Hi Lucy:) I like your biopem picture and like that you wanted to move to japan i thouht moving to Toyko Japan would be amazing place to live and i thought it was creative how you said your a resident of Earth instead of saying the name of your street. I loved your fancy front that you use. I think you did a great jod explaining yourself and i can relate to you:D
This is a really great Bio-poem. I really liked how you used multiple posts and many colors. It was a really good Bio-poem.
Good Job and I like the fonts and colors.
Nice Job and i think did good with the colors.